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Faces On The Wall Frozen

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Faces On The Wall/Frozen

I look at her, talking with the others.
She holds them just close enough, in her life,  but still so far away.
I've heard the rumors about her, that she has so many conquests, so many faces on her wall.
My head says I don't want to be another.
My heart looks at her, and sees the frozen wall.
My heart hopes that I can get to her before she dies of the cold.
I was at the can redemption center, which always has the local pop station on.
A song called "Jar Of Hearts" came on.
It snuck into my head and still has not left, despite my attempts to do so...
I do not know how a song about a girl that has been hurt by a guy, was turned into something the opposite, just about.
This is my very first Deviation, It Is Crap.
EVERYONE's first time at anything creative is usually crap.
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momopocky's avatar
This isn't bad! I'd say poetry is even more subjective than visual art though!